Here is a link to my second edit of my final project:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2ccMVG2RMFU
After my tutorial last week, I have made quite a few adjustments try and make my film more consistent in lighting, framing, etc.... I have also reduced the script.
Within the first minute, the film goes black. This is suppose to happen as I haven't decided what footage to use here yet.